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Hmm...

Better than SFS 2, the action was a smoother, and had sound.

Some tips for improvement: Color/detail the background, overall its a little bit of work, but a big improvement.
Speed up the pace of the action. It picks up at about the middle, then pauses. A slow beginning is fine, the climax is supposed to be the most enjoyable, so maybe taking down a guy every two seconds would be a good speed.
Finally, some VARIETY, throw in some different weapons. A bat, a sword, maybe some guns, a rocket launcher, hey maybe a tank or a plane. (Shoot the plane with a rocket :D).
Sure it will take longer to make a Flash like that, but the quality would be amazing. Your definitely capable of front page, you just need to aim for it.

slowz responds:

ok!

Sound!

Really needs some sound. Oh, and maybe a background to help with those rotating-camera shots.

slowz responds:

I know man! Thanks.

More action

Every good flash movie has animation of some sort, conversations just aren't that interesting. The bonus movie was better than the primary one. To put it simple, instead of stick killing, make it clay killing. I always love mass carnage. =)

Nonsense-Ninja responds:

sigh, im tired of shit like that.

Did you spell idol wrong on purpose?

Finally something I can vote high on. I'm kind of tired of the Numa fad, but good work.

Dustball responds:

Yes, it's a parody.

Needs a change

This series is getting really dry now. It wasn't that good to begin with really. Half the flash is text, and each actual scene is 5 seconds.
You should just make a consistent story and eliminate your text cuts all together.

Ryan-Smith responds:

NO way that is the main thing of this, the text and short animation.

Nice Animation

Your Animating skills are great. You should really work on a longer movie. Also try to throw in a plot or theme, Solid shapes are also more appealing.

Joboftheslug responds:

From what people have said i think i might make this one longer and try to get a plot in somehow i got an i dea of what i can do to it now to add a bit more flare. just need to find the time to do it

It was okay

It should be longer. The file size is too large for how short this is. The song goes on long after the movie is finished, delete the end of the song and your file size should drop off 2 mb.

FreakySkull responds:

Okay... just wanted to make sure you guys could see my beautiful preloader.. just kidding, I'll remove the rest of the song when I take the series to the next step.

Crap like the others

You should really stop getting your friends or whatever to vote for you. Your flashes shouldn't be able to pass judgement. Anyways, maybe if you take some suggestions into consideration your flashes will get better.
1. Try spending more time on flashes instead of just a couple hour/ one day project. I suggest at least a week.
2. A story is definitely needed. Some sort of plot or joke instead of random mindless things.
3. Aerdail has potential, a plot is needed though.
4.2RS needs a lot of help, Story, longer, good animation, better ideas, and better artwork. Overall, everything needs work.
5.Night Raider could use improved artwork, stay away from stick figures. Aim for better jokes (if you even call what you made a joke).
6.Onestar should try animating the person smoothly using flash instead of importing images. Again aim for a story or joke.

The point of this lengthy review is so that I and others on Newgrounds don't have to see this crap. Make better flashes. I expect some major improvements on your next flash.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

NO IMPROVEMENT 4 U!

meh

A bunch of different objects with clocks scrolling across the screen...

Redneck-Clock responds:

Watch Gundam Seed ending to understand.

"Coding for multi-core systems is more trouble than it's worth. Crashing due to race conditions and data dependencies takes a long time to debug, and in the end, the critical sections leave you with the same performance you started with."

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