Scott007's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[-SFS 1-]

Hmm...

Better than SFS 2, the action was a smoother, and had sound.

Some tips for improvement: Color/detail the background, overall its a little bit of work, but a big improvement.
Speed up the pace of the action. It picks up at about the middle, then pauses. A slow beginning is fine, the climax is supposed to be the most enjoyable, so maybe taking down a guy every two seconds would be a good speed.
Finally, some VARIETY, throw in some different weapons. A bat, a sword, maybe some guns, a rocket launcher, hey maybe a tank or a plane. (Shoot the plane with a rocket :D).
Sure it will take longer to make a Flash like that, but the quality would be amazing. Your definitely capable of front page, you just need to aim for it.

slowz responds:

ok!

[-SFS 2-]

Sound!

Really needs some sound. Oh, and maybe a background to help with those rotating-camera shots.

slowz responds:

I know man! Thanks.

[DailyToon11092004]

Crap like the others

You should really stop getting your friends or whatever to vote for you. Your flashes shouldn't be able to pass judgement. Anyways, maybe if you take some suggestions into consideration your flashes will get better.
1. Try spending more time on flashes instead of just a couple hour/ one day project. I suggest at least a week.
2. A story is definitely needed. Some sort of plot or joke instead of random mindless things.
3. Aerdail has potential, a plot is needed though.
4.2RS needs a lot of help, Story, longer, good animation, better ideas, and better artwork. Overall, everything needs work.
5.Night Raider could use improved artwork, stay away from stick figures. Aim for better jokes (if you even call what you made a joke).
6.Onestar should try animating the person smoothly using flash instead of importing images. Again aim for a story or joke.

The point of this lengthy review is so that I and others on Newgrounds don't have to see this crap. Make better flashes. I expect some major improvements on your next flash.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

NO IMPROVEMENT 4 U!