Scott007's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SK8r']

Nice Animation

Your Animating skills are great. You should really work on a longer movie. Also try to throw in a plot or theme, Solid shapes are also more appealing.

Joboftheslug responds:

From what people have said i think i might make this one longer and try to get a plot in somehow i got an i dea of what i can do to it now to add a bit more flare. just need to find the time to do it

[Thief Ninja]

Preloader...

You should really learn how to make an actual preloader. Your fake preloader finished too soon and I still had to wait for the song to load.

Your battle scene was too simple. It was slash and go. You should put multiple rooms, each room having guards and different ways to deal with them. A ninja thief should kill without being seen by his victim.

[Alien - Trailer]

It was okay

It should be longer. The file size is too large for how short this is. The song goes on long after the movie is finished, delete the end of the song and your file size should drop off 2 mb.

FreakySkull responds:

Okay... just wanted to make sure you guys could see my beautiful preloader.. just kidding, I'll remove the rest of the song when I take the series to the next step.

[DailyToon01052005]

A decent Daily Toon

I'm surprised to find a daily toon i didn't vote 0/5 on. If this was finished, I probably would have voted higher than 3/5. I hope to see more good Daily Toons.

[Man Gets Broadband]

Nice

It was good at first, but towards the end it got sickening, especially the shit getting shoved down the dead birds throat. Good anyway though.

[Flash to the Future]

What if people didn't see Back to the Future?

I would think this flash would make no sense at all to people who have never seen the movie. The scenes happened quickly and no words were spoken. Graphics certainly beat mine. Think up a good story and use flash to tell it.

[Holocaust]

Hmmm

I nearly put the same thing about historical accuracy as ano_45.
One thing I find interesting

"Today, there would have to be thousands of trials for the war in Korea, Vietnam, Algeria, and Truman would have been condemned for dropping the bombs on Hiroshima and Nagisaki."

Heh heh, I'm working on a flash right now about Japan getting back at the US taking down the whole world with it 3000 years in the future.
Before going too off topic...
Graphics--stickfigures can't expect a good score
style--not original
sound--just music
violence--stick figure killed by gun, and a nondescript burning pile interactivity--none whatsoever
humor--If this is funny to someone they need help
overall--2 for getting the message across, somewhat

[DailyToon11182004: j00b]

Oh no...

Getting the title "Underdog of the Week" will probably boost your already oversized ego(s). And who are these Daily Toon fans anyway? Go around your school and offer money? Make accounts on all the school computers? There just can't be a legitimate reason for your high scores.

[DailyToon11092004]

Crap like the others

You should really stop getting your friends or whatever to vote for you. Your flashes shouldn't be able to pass judgement. Anyways, maybe if you take some suggestions into consideration your flashes will get better.
1. Try spending more time on flashes instead of just a couple hour/ one day project. I suggest at least a week.
2. A story is definitely needed. Some sort of plot or joke instead of random mindless things.
3. Aerdail has potential, a plot is needed though.
4.2RS needs a lot of help, Story, longer, good animation, better ideas, and better artwork. Overall, everything needs work.
5.Night Raider could use improved artwork, stay away from stick figures. Aim for better jokes (if you even call what you made a joke).
6.Onestar should try animating the person smoothly using flash instead of importing images. Again aim for a story or joke.

The point of this lengthy review is so that I and others on Newgrounds don't have to see this crap. Make better flashes. I expect some major improvements on your next flash.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

NO IMPROVEMENT 4 U!

[Sadness of the...]

meh

A bunch of different objects with clocks scrolling across the screen...

Redneck-Clock responds:

Watch Gundam Seed ending to understand.